1. What did you like about my music magazine?
2. What did you dislike about my music magazine?
3. How does my magazine compare to my draft layouts?
4. what improvements could be made?
in terms of the front cover, i like how the model looking serious as he looks at the audience while the light seems to shine on one side of his face causing the other side to have shadows. the weakness however is that the thing above the website seems to be a bit big and it takes up some space the magazine seems to be better than the draft layout due to it being made but also because it seems good. try and make some room cuz it looks cluttered contents page seems to be neat and organized and seems to be clear however two of the images seems to be irrelevant to the topic idk add some more pictures of other artists dps looks clear and organized it seems that the small pictures are irrelevant again to the magazine idk add pictures that is appropriate to the subject
I like the font style of the masthead, especially as the MM links in with the other ‘M’ in magazine. I also like the way you have position the things on your content page. I believe that you should have used a small dot instead of a big circle for your website link. With your contents page, you just need to add page numbers, but apart from this, I like how “Contents” comes down instead of across, which we usually see. I really like the photo you have used for your DPS content, especially as the picture has a background shadow. I think what you could have done to improve is to have your teasers on one side and main coverlines on the other. Also, try to add one or two more questions, which will have more content, linking to the price your audience has to pay for your magazine
in terms of the front cover, i like how the model looking serious as he looks at the audience while the light seems to shine on one side of his face causing the other side to have shadows.
ReplyDeletethe weakness however is that the thing above the website seems to be a bit big and it takes up some space
the magazine seems to be better than the draft layout due to it being made but also because it seems good.
try and make some room cuz it looks cluttered
contents page seems to be neat and organized and seems to be clear
however two of the images seems to be irrelevant to the topic
idk
add some more pictures of other artists
dps looks clear and organized
it seems that the small pictures are irrelevant again to the magazine
idk
add pictures that is appropriate to the subject
I like the font style of the masthead, especially as the MM links in with the other ‘M’ in magazine. I also like the way you have position the things on your content page. I believe that you should have used a small dot instead of a big circle for your website link. With your contents page, you just need to add page numbers, but apart from this, I like how “Contents” comes down instead of across, which we usually see. I really like the photo you have used for your DPS content, especially as the picture has a background shadow. I think what you could have done to improve is to have your teasers on one side and main coverlines on the other. Also, try to add one or two more questions, which will have more content, linking to the price your audience has to pay for your magazine
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